Comments on: How is my holloween story? http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2 Sun, 07 Feb 2010 14:38:59 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Ms.Piggy http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2/comment-page-1#comment-1985 Ms.Piggy Tue, 06 Oct 2009 02:03:59 +0000 http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2#comment-1985 i dont get the very ending,"There was no costume contest at the party". can someone xplain to me plz<br><b>References : </b><br>=) i dont get the very ending,"There was no costume contest at the party". can someone xplain to me plz
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]]> By: ~*Smile~* http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2/comment-page-1#comment-1984 ~*Smile~* Tue, 06 Oct 2009 01:22:59 +0000 http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2#comment-1984 Good job. The last part is sort of cut off, so try to finish the sentence. The readers know that the costume is probably real or haunted, so try to make it a less eerie, so you will leave the readers hanging, and when the suspense comes on, add tons of descreption of the costume too. Hope you liked my critique!<br><b>References : </b><br> Good job. The last part is sort of cut off, so try to finish the sentence.
The readers know that the costume is probably real or haunted, so try to make it a less eerie, so you will leave the readers hanging, and when the suspense comes on, add tons of descreption of the costume too.

Hope you liked my critique!
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]]> By: missydxi http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2/comment-page-1#comment-1982 missydxi Tue, 06 Oct 2009 01:12:59 +0000 http://www.cesoirfinelingerie.com/body-glove-accessories/how-is-my-holloween-story-2#comment-1982 lol, no costume contest. it's good.<br><b>References : </b><br> lol, no costume contest.

it’s good.
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